Crime on Mars Vocab Essay

Vocab Words: replica, enigma, aboriginal, inquisitive, incredible
                Tommy just can't find the replica of the Last Super. This engima is driving Tommy crazy. He couldn't think of anyone who would have stolen it , or who would have know where it is. Is it one of my firends? Is it my wife? Tommy's inquisitive mind keeps on asking questions. "Whoever stole this is incredible." Tommy thought, "I locked it with so many locks!" But no matter how long it would take to find this painting, he still had to. Since his family had held on to this painting for so long, he thought that it could be an aboriginal painting. "I will go ask my wife then."

Dog Star Quickwrite

            The setting of this story is at night and on the moon. The narrator's dog was a relly good friend to him, he loves it so much., that he still misses him avan after it died. One day the dog ran off, and an earthquake, so the narrator had to leave it to survive. The narrater later found it. But the narrator later needed to go to the moon because he is an astronaut. Since he cannot bring any pets to the moon, so he had to leave him on Earth. After few months, the dog died because it doesn't any will to live. The narrator still deams and misses it after that.

Villain Quickwrite (revised)

    A villain is a bad guy or girl in a story, cartoon or movie. He or she is the one that goes agginst the main character. In the movie called Despicable Me, the villan wears bright orange the whole day. The villan in the movie is trying to beat another villain in the competition of the best villain, but later he kidnapped the main character's children. I don't like this character, but I think he is a pretty good villain because he can beat another villain.

Villain Quickwrite

    A villain is a bad guy or girl in a story, cartoon or movie. He or she is the one that goes agginst the main character. In the movie called Despicable Me, the villan wears bright orange the whole day. The villan in the movie is trying to win another villain in the competition of the best villain, but later he kidnapped the main character's children.

Vocabulary Quiz

1. I feel really sad for the desolating loss of my dog.
2. I will want to be an astronomer one day.
3. What are those stellar circles in the sky?
4. In the middle of the crowd, there is a luminous dimond.
5. Everyone thinks he is weird because of his misanthropic behavior.
6. This world is too big that we cannot finish understanding this terrestrial nature.
7. Tommy finished the competition by default.
8. No one can solve this labyrine math problem.

Vocabulary Quiz (revised)

1. I feel really sad about the desloating loss of my dog.
2. I want to be one of the astronomers one day.
3. If you want to learn about stellar information, you can go study astonomy.
4. You can only see the luminous and shiny stars in the night sky.
5. He doesn't have any friends because of his misanthropic behavior.
6. Those aliens want to learn about the terrestrial plants so they can know if they have food here.
7. I won the swimming contest by default because my contestants didn't come.
8. No one can solve this labyrinthine math problem.

Dog Star Quickwrite 2-pets

       I had a pet mouse that I loved, but she still always bit me. I love that mouse that I still feed her and change her house. But after few years, she died. People love their pets so much because they are like best friends and family, they are all very important to its owner.  An animal can be your best friend when it accompanys you when you are sad or happy. When you are sad, it rubs its body aggainst you to show that it cares about you. That is what friends do. They are sad when you are sad, and they are happy when you are sad. You can't communicate, but the feeling you guys have can. You miss it, and it will miss you when you are not together.

Dog Star Quickwrite 2-pets (reivsed)

            I had a pet hamster that I loved, but she still always bit me. I love that hamster and I still feed and clean her cage. But after a few years, she died. People love their pets so much because they are like best friends and family, they are very important to their owner. An animal can be yoru best friend when it accompanys you when you are sad or happy. When you are sad, it rubs its body aggainst you to show that it cares about you. That is what friends do. They are sad when you are sad, and they are happy when you are sad. Feeling can't communicate but they can be shared between the pets and the owners. You miss your pet when it is not around.

Dog Star Quickwrite (revised)

           The setting of this story is at night and on the moon. The narrator's dog was a relly good friend to him, he loved it so much., that he still misses him avan after it died. One day the dog ran off, and an earthquake occured so the narrator had to leave it to survive. The narrater later found the dog. But the narrator later needed to go to the moon because he is an astronaut. Since he cannot bring any pets to the moon, so he had to leave him on Earth. After few months, the dog died because it didn't any will to live. The narrator still dreams and misses it after that.