Wednesday, November 3, 2010

The Interlopers Vocabulary Quickwrite

                  One of the marauders that roams around and search of things to steal found a very weak woman on the road picking paper boxes and plastics. The woman seems that she doesn't want to be notice as she climb up the precipitous slope up to the mountain. The man wanted to give the woman succor so he went up to her. "Hey. My name is John, do you need any help?", the man sent condolences to the woman. "I no need any help, go away!", the woman retorted. "I just want to know if you have any langur that I can help you with." "Go away!" The woman felt annoyed by his exasperation of expressing sympathy. "I shall help you or I shall die of God's hands because I didn't help you." The man's words were pious. The woman stared at him. "I just want a reconciliation here" The woman was silent. "So do you acquiesced with me?" The woman finally said something after a long silence, "Okay, you can help me push this box of gold up the hill to my house next to the river.

1 comment:

  1. Languor is not something you have. Sometimes it's used to detail mood, for example a could be described "It was hot, yet with a sweet languor about it"

    Exasperation is not used correctly either. Example. The mother tried to control her exasperation with her children and talk to them patiently.

    Correct and Pass.

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